In 2007 a little childrens' group painted a picture in a school.
when they finished, a person kept these picture for to do a studio. He wanted
to display the picture in a museum as if it had been painted by someone else.
He went to the museum in Madrid, he hung the picture in the wall and later he asked the persons who saw it:"What felings the author expresses in this picture?"
Some persons were answering that the author was expressing the desperation, others were answering that the society, and few persons were saying that they didn´t like the picture because it was very simple.
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ResponderEliminarIn 2007 a little childrens' group painted a picture (in) AT a school.
When they finished, a person kept (these) THIS picture (for) to SET UP (do) a studio. He wanted
to display the pictureS in a museum as if it had been painted by someone else.
He went to the museum in Madrid, he hung the picture (in) ON the wall and later he asked the (persons) PEOPLE who saw it: "What felings DOES the author (expresses) EXPRESS in this picture?"
Some (persons) PEOPLE ANSWERED (were answering) that the author was expressing (the) desperation, others (were answering) ANSWERED that the PICTURE REFLECTED society, and A few (persons were saying) PEOPLE SAID that they didn´t like the picture because it was very simple.